The Raft
By Stephen Caesar
Things that go
bump in the sea
He looked on in
dismay as his ship went down, its prow jutting upward into the dying embers of
that August night on the Sargasso Sea. He was the only one who had survived the
exploding boiler and the subsequent conflagration that had gutted the vessel in
mere moments. The vessel itself was but a small, shabby fishing vessel out of
Bermuda, manned by a tiny handful of 5 ordinary men. In the roaring chaos of
the disaster, he was the only one who had had the opportunity to take hold of
the rubber life raft and pitch it overboard. He leaped feet-first after it,
hoping the others would follow, but as he landed on the undulating floor of the
raft, he looked upward to see the boat haplessly swallowed by flames, the
screams of his shipmates choking off as the inferno engulfed them in fiery
oblivion.
He lay there in
shock, not from any injury but from the enormity of the disaster, and of the
hopelessness of his situation. He had no paddle or other means of propulsion,
and in the rapidity of the disaster he had had no time to gather provisions,
including water. He simply lay stretched out on the damp floor of the rubber
raft, gazing upward with a traumatized stare at the orange-gray of the twilit
sky above him.
The raft drifted
aimlessly. He knew well enough not to put his hand in the water to simulate a
crude paddle: there was far too great a risk of sharks. He could do nothing but
float helplessly through the unending mass of sargassum, the bizarre seaweed
that gathered in the wide stretch of Atlantic south of Bermuda and north of the
Caribbean islands. It forms miles upon miles of living mats, some so thick one
could almost stand on them. In the dying light, he could see the eerie, tangled
masses of living, botanic land stretch to the horizon in every direction as he
briefly raised his head and peered over the edge of the raft. In despair, he
slumped back down and lay prostrate on the clammy floor of his tiny boat, its
rubber floor the only thing separating him from the merciless ocean and its
equally merciless denizens.
With deepening
despair, he stared helplessly upward, like a turtle that had been flipped over
and was pitifully unable to right itself. His despair intensified as the
oceanic twilight inexorably gave way to utter, inky darkness. Exhausted from
his ordeal, and sinking into a profound despondency, he mercifully fell asleep
as total blackness enveloped him and his minute craft.
He had been asleep
for an unknown stretch of time before he felt it. It jolted him awake and
caused him to inhale sharply with a combination of a hiss and a gasp. It felt
as if someone with a balled fist had firmly but gently pushed against the
bottom of the raft. An experienced seaman, he knew that it could well have been
any sort of fairly large creature, from a harmless sea turtle to his death in
shark form, or any manner of oceanic animal in between. Since this intrusion
was not repeated, he once again began to drift off.
But just as his
brain was entering the first stages of sleep, he felt it again. This time,
however, it was more as if a limb was stroking the bottom of the raft for a
length of about two feet. Again, this jolted him awake but did not cause him
any panic. Nonetheless, he froze where he lay, realizing that, if the curious
marine animal beneath him was a shark searching for an evening meal, any
squirming or sudden movements on his part would quickly and inevitably lead to
his sanguinary demise.
Soon the
groping, pawing sensation went away. Obviously, the inquisitive sea creature
had lost interest and moved on. It clearly did not find prey made of synthetic
rubber to be the least bit palatable. For the third time, the marooned
fisherman drifted off into a leaden sleep. And for the third time, he woke with
a start. He knew—he could not be mistaken—that something below the raft had
once again poked or prodded him. This time, however, it distinctly felt like a
hand, or some sort of appendage that was able to grasp. The appendage had
unmistakably tried to grasp onto him through the thin but tough fabric of the
life raft.
This time the
experienced seaman panicked. He arched his back in fright, trying almost
childishly to escape from the eerily grasping appendage in the black depths
below him, so close to his body. The arching of his back caused his head at one
end of the raft and his feet at the other to sink into the raft’s bottom,
creating a triangle of bulges that jutted downward into the water. To his
horror, he felt the ghastly, grasping appendage fondle the crown of his head
through the material that comprised the raft’s floor. Almost simultaneously,
two more of the horrid, hand-like things took hold of each foot through the
rubber material. Reflexively, he yanked his feet away from the grotesque things
that had taken hold of them, but this merely caused his body to flop loudly
down onto the bottom of the raft.
Almost at once,
to his complete horror, two
sets of feeling, groping appendages began exploring the impression made by his
back against the bottom of the raft. With illogical panic he rolled from side
to side in a vain attempt to get his flesh away from the grasping, searching
hand-things below him, but they merely followed the writhing of his body as
they made moving, sinuous impressions in the fabric of the raft’s bottom. Where
once he had been mute with horror, he now began emitting almost child-like
cries of panic and fear. The more he thrashed about on the floor of the little
boat, the more the ghoulish appendages seemed to grasp at him.
Suddenly and
inexplicably, the hand-things stopped their exploratory groping. The mariner’s
relief was short-lived, however, as he began to feel the grasping things move
deliberately and inexorably toward the edge of the raft. He stared in silent
horror at the foot of the little vessel as he felt groping, exploring hands
move toward the stern and up the inflated edge of the raft. Waves of ineffable
panic tore across him as he saw, in the pale, feeble light provided by a
three-quarter moon and a multitude of stars, a ghastly, weedy hand reach up
from the black waters and the twisted mats of seaweed.
The grotesque
horror was remarkably like a human hand in size and form, with four fingers and
an opposable thumb. It grasped the edge of the raft, its digits pressing into
the rubber material. The seaman lay in frozen terror as the hand was joined by
its fellow. They gripped the tube-shaped edge of the raft, pressing downward as
if they were lifting up the body that owned them. With instinctual panic, the
fisherman kicked at both hands simultaneously with each foot, and they suddenly
let go.
But almost
immediately they were replaced by another pair along the side of the raft, near
the sailor’s right arm. They seemed to crawl toward him, like two revolting,
weed-covered tarantulas. Again with mindless instinct borne of sheer terror,
the fisherman pounded away at the grotesque appendages with his left fist. They
felt spongy and plant-like as they gave way slightly to his blows. At last
they, too, ceded their grip and slid back into the water. Almost as soon as
that had happened, yet another pair, this one on his left, began grasping and
groping its way up the side of the raft. With his right fist he pounded at the
hands like a madman, and within seconds they dropped out of sight beneath the
weed-covered surface.
For several
moments all remained still. The mariner lay in a petrified state on the bottom
of the raft, breathing with sharp, uneven inhalations. All around him the sea
was silent. Only the lapping of the water and the slight swishing sound of the
weed-mats rubbing up against the outer sides of the raft were audible. After a
few minutes, his laborious breathing began to return to normal, and his
furiously pounding heart began to resume its natural pace. His steel-tense body
started to relax as exhaustion once again vanquished him.
The warm, still
night air was suddenly rent by the splashing sound of two algal hands bursting
through the surface of the water and grasping the stern of the raft. Before the
fisherman could react, the hands took hold of the tubular edge of the inflated
boat and began hauling up the body to which they were attached. Panic conquered
him again as an unspeakable head appeared over the stern of the raft. The
apparition matched the hands: it was in shape and form like a human head, but
had no human face. Where the face should have been was a mass of short, curly
weeds dripping with seawater. The only resemblance to a human face was the most
horrific aspect of the monstrosity that now confronted the sailor: two eyes,
exactly where they would be on a human being, but lacking pupils or lids and
glowing with the pale fire of an inner malevolence.
Feral panic seized
the stranded fisherman, and he kicked out with both feet, striking the marine
monstrosity square in the face with his two booted heels. The thing emitted a
serpentine hiss and slid back into the depths, but it was almost immediately
replaced by another, equally ghastly assailant who burst suddenly from the
water at the prow of the raft, just behind the beleaguered mariner’s head. The
creature grasped the stem of the raft and hauled its human-like torso halfway
onto the craft, practically placing its revolting self on top of the
fisherman’s upper body. He let out a bellow of horror and revulsion as he
repelled the being with both his arms, made strong by years of hauling in
fishing nets. The scabrous, spongy creature spat out a hiss of disapproval and
slid back into the inky depths.
Once again all was
still and silent, and again the stranded mariner breathed loudly and unevenly.
He lay half-mad on the bottom of the raft, splayed out in an asymmetrical
position. Suddenly, from all sides of the raft—fore, aft, port, and
starboard—four pairs of hands, followed by four heads and torsos, burst out of
the water and assaulted the raft in unison. The creature at the stern took hold
of each of the seafarer’s ankles, while the ones on each side grabbed an arm.
Worst of all, the entity that was climbing up the front of the raft began
pawing at his face and throat with revoltingly spongy fingers.
Babbling and
shouting with inconceivable dread, the mariner reached up and clawed at the two
loathsome appendages that were assailing his face, while he kicked against the
abomination that was pulling him by the ankles as if to drag him into the briny
depths. At the same time, the two on each side of the raft raked and clawed
with reedy, squelching fingers at this chest and midsection. The fisherman
writhed and contorted in horror and revulsion, but to no avail. No matter what
way he twisted, he found himself in the nauseating grip of one of his clawing,
grasping, spongy assailants. And all the while the eyes—those pale, lidless,
soulless, ghastly, glowing eyes—pierced the semi-darkness and stared at him
with ineffable malevolence.
The creature that
was grabbing his ankles seemed to be the most powerful of that quartet of
horror, for it managed, more than the other three, to use the mariner’s legs as
a pair of ropes with which to haul itself up over the edge of the raft and onto
the seaman’s lower body. The fisherman gasped in horror as he looked downward,
along the length of his prostrate body, to see a human-sized, human-shaped mass
of seaweed inexorably drag itself up his legs toward his face, those baleful,
glowing eyes staring straight at him.
Closer and closer
the thing pulled its way up the sailor’s stricken body; closer and closer came
those glowing orbs toward his face. The creature was light and spongy, as if
its entire body was made of sargassum. Slowly, relentlessly it grasped and
yanked at the sailor’s wet clothing, pulling itself ever toward his face even
as he writhed and slashed in an attempt to remove the dripping organism from
off his person. The unceasing assaults from the other three galling
monstrosities, however, rendered his efforts useless, and within minutes the
lead creature was fully on top of him. The fisherman’s body bucked and rocked
wildly in a mad, animalistic attempt to dislodge the saline abomination, but
his efforts were futile. The creature’s three fellows had all managed to crawl
over the side of the raft, and all four of the foul things had piled themselves
on top of the wildly bucking, screaming man.
The last thing he
remembered was a mass of clammy, dripping seaweed-hands groping and clutching
at his body, and four inconceivably frightening pairs of glowing, lidless eyes
closing in on him. As consciousness left him, eight green-glowing eyes were
joined by a ninth, this one a perfectly round, yellow-white eye of seemingly
infinite brightness and potency.
He slipped into
mental oblivion before he was able to learn that this new, round eye was the
powerful search beam of a United States Coast Guard helicopter, which had been
on routine patrol in the sector and had seen, off in the distance in the dying
sunlight, the explosion that had doomed the fishing boat’s tiny crew.
The End
Stephen Caesar, stephencaesar@hotmail.com, wrote BP #89’s “The Raft,”
his first fiction submission. He has had two scholarly, peer-reviewed articles
published in “The Jewish Bible Quarterly.” A former adjunct professor of
English literature at Newbury College in Boston, MA, he is currently an English
tutor for various standardized tests, such as the SAT and ACT.