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Shari Held: A Stinging Rebuke

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Art by Bernice Holtzman © 2025

A STINGING REBUKE

by Shari Held

 

Mrs. Bristow clenched and unclenched her fists as she cast her gaze on the lifeless body of the man who had made her a widow a scant two minutes ago. It was all over now. Him. Their marriage.

She removed his rugged black farm jacket, straightened his shirt, patted down his hair, and closed his eyes. She’d been mucking out the milk barn and her hands stank of manure. Didn’t matter now. Even if he were alive, it wouldn’t matter. He’d lost his sense of smell—anosmia they called it—years ago. She untied the pink-checked apron she wore over her faded dress and laid it across his face. Then she retreated to the farmhouse to call the sheriff, her shoulders stiff as the jacket she carried with her.

The telltale plume of dust on the unpaved road arrived on the horizon minutes before Sheriff Hogan and the coroner. They parked the car in the middle of the winding gravel driveway near the body, not far from Mrs. Bristow’s apiary and herb garden.

She watched behind pristine lace curtains as the coroner lifted the apron from her husband’s face, then stood beside the sheriff and studied Joe’s body for a few minutes. As Sheriff Hogan headed toward the house, she went to the kitchen, returning to the front parlor with a pitcher of lemonade and two glasses on a tray.

The sheriff took off his hat as he entered. “Sorry for your loss, ma’am. Joe was a good man, well-respected around town.

Mrs. Bristow didn’t trust herself to speak, so she silently motioned for him to sit on the sofa while she poured the lemonade. She wondered what the protocol was in a situation like this. Should she begin the conversation or wait to be questioned? She decided to leave it to the sheriff. The less said, the better.

He took a sip and cleared his throat. “Mrs. Bristow, you’re a bee expert. Raised them for years. What do you think happened?”

“Well, he was deathly allergic.”

The sheriff pursed his lips. “Then why would he allow you to have a yard filled with hives?”

“Joe and I never had any children. And he knew I loved caring for those bees. Did you know that more than three-quarters of all the earth’s flowering plants need pollination to bloom? On the practical side, the sale of honey and beeswax supplemented our income. You know how hard it is to make a living farming these days.” She bowed her head, grabbed the tea towel from the lemonade tray, and buried her face in it.

After a minute, she raised her head, her eyes red-rimmed and overflowing with tears. “It’s all my fault Joe’s dead. I was trying to attract swarms of bees to grow my hives. Have more honey to sell. A swarm must have appeared while he was near the hives. If he flapped his arms and tried to scare them away, they would have attacked and stung him relentlessly.”

“Wouldn’t he know better than to do that after living around your bees?”

“He would. But with hundreds of bees swarming about, I think he forgot and reacted on instinct.”

“Yes, you’re probably right.” He looked out the window and saw the coroner writing in his notebook. “Excuse me, ma’am. I need to talk to the coroner. I’ll be right back.”

#

“So, what’s your call, Dave? You ruling this an accidental death?”

The coroner stood up. “Not necessarily, Sheriff.”

“No? Why not? Wasn’t he killed by an allergic reaction?”

“That’s the cause of death. But I’m not so sure it was accidental.” The coroner pointed to the body. “Take a closer look. Tell me what you see.”

“I see a man covered with bee stings, his face swollen and red.”

“Yep. You see that distorted face and you don’t look any further.” He covered the victim’s face. “Now, look again. What do you notice?”

The sheriff’s gaze traveled from the dead man’s neck down to his arms. “He’s wearing a short-sleeved shirt, but he doesn’t have a bee sting anywhere on his arms. What the heck?”

“Exactly. I’d say he was wearing a jacket that covered his arms and torso. And for whatever reason, someone—he looked toward the house—removed his jacket before we arrived.”

“Now, why would she do that?” The sheriff paced the area a bit, while he conjured up and discarded different scenarios. He ended up in the herb garden, his eyes focused on the patch of lemongrass. “Unless. . .”

#

The sheriff marched to the house and knocked on the door. It took Mrs. Bristow a few minutes to open it.

“Sorry, Sheriff. I was about to sort the laundry. Life goes on, you know.”

“I’d like to see that laundry, if you don’t mind.”

For the first time since he’d been there an emotion flitted across her face. Fear.

“What? I . . .I don’t understand.”

“Oh, I think you do. Tell me. Didn’t your husband suffer from a permanent loss of smell?”

She nodded.

 “And isn’t it true that a spray containing lemongrass, an herb you grow in your garden, is often used to attract swarming bees? If I go to the laundry room, will I find your husband’s jacket? And will it stink to high heaven of lemongrass?”

Mrs. Bristow turned as white as her lace curtains.

That was all he needed. “Mrs. Bristow, I’m arresting you for the murder of your husband.” He read her the rights, then retrieved the jacket, reeking of lemongrass, from the laundry room as well as the tea towel she’d used earlier. It contained a slice of cut onion tied into one corner. So much for her widow’s tears.

“Why’d you do it, Mrs. Bristow?”

She gave him a look as venomous as the bees that had killed her husband. “He wasn’t the model citizen everyone thought he was. Always belittled me in a million little ways. This morning he ragged at me for burning his toast. I got tired of it.”

She shrugged.

“It was one stinging rebuke too many.”

Shari Held is an Indianapolis-based fiction writer who spins tales of mystery, horror, and romance. Her short stories have been published in numerous magazines and anthologies, including Yellow Mama, Hoosier Noir, Asinine Assassins, Homicide for the Holidays, and Between the Covers. When not writing, she cares for feral cats and other wildlife, reads, and strategizes imaginative ways for characters and trouble to collide!

Bernice Holtzman’s paintings and collages have appeared in shows at various venues in Manhattan, including the Back Fence in Greenwich Village, the Producer’s Club, the Black Door Gallery on W. 26th St., and one other place she can’t remember, but it was in a basement, and she was well received. She is the Assistant Art Director for Yellow Mama.

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