Black Petals Issue #112 Summer, 2025

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An Early Grave: Poem by Stephanie Smith
Doppelganger: Poem by Stephanie Smith
The Sounds of Night: Poem by Stephanie Smith
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Under Cover of Night: Poem by Kenneth Vincent Walker

John Whitehouse: For Every Sinner

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Art by Andrew Graber © 2025

For Every Sinner

 

 

John Whitehouse

 

 

Marlon stands in the sullen glow of the lamp post’s light. The park is the ideal place for what he’s about to do. Its twisting paths, not to mention the abundance of shrubbery, create a sense of seclusion, especially at night.

Marlon tenses. Someone is approaching. He conceals himself in some bushes and watches as a woman emerges from the darkness, entering the dim circle of glow. She’s walking her dog, a small terrier-like thing. Apart from her the path is deserted.  

Marlon feels the familiar jolt of excitement. Hands shooting from his pockets, he springs from the bushes. Within seconds, the piano wire – whose ends are covered in plastic – is wrapped around the woman’s neck. Marlon can feel the wire sink into flesh as he pulls it tight.

There’s not much chance for the woman to fight back. Her hands claw aimlessly at her neck, desperately trying to get at the wire while it sinks deeper and deeper into the tissue. Apart from Marlon, there’s no-one around to hear her raspy, gurgling gasps.

Marlon stares at the woman’s now lifeless body, sprawled at his feet. Once again he’s filled with a savage exhilaration. He shoves the piano wire back into his pocket and hurries away along the path.      

Leaving the park, he makes his way along the street to his car, which is parked nearby. His blood’s still tingling as he climbs in and drives off. He’s crossing an intersection when a truck jumps a red light and ploughs straight into him.

 

It’s a hot and sultry night. Music spills out of clubs and bars. Marlon’s standing on a crowded sidewalk wearing jeans and a loose fitting shirt. The last thing he remembers is the truck, then blackness rolling over him. Where is he? What’s happening? His mind spins with utter confusion.

His gaze fixes on a girl leaving a bar alone. She’s in her twenties, slim with peroxide hair, wearing a short denim jacket and skirt. She makes her way drunkenly along the street and, as if compelled by some invisible force, Marlon follows. About a block further on she halts outside the door to an apartment block. Marlon is standing just a few feet behind her. His memory prickles. There’s something familiar about this scene.

The girl pushes her key into the lock, opens the door and steps over the threshold. Marlon casts furtive glances to left and right and, before the girl can close the door, he rushes forward and shoves her inside. He slams the door behind him. He can’t stop himself. His hands are round her throat, crushing, squeezing. He lets go and the girl’s lifeless body crumples to the floor.

The scene fades, and now he’s standing on the edge of some waste ground, dusk thickening about him, the grinding throb of traffic nearby. A woman is walking across it, a shortcut on her way home from work. She’s in her thirties, dark hair fluttering about her head in a light breeze. She’s wearing a business suit, dark blue jacket and slacks, and carrying a leather purse. Marlon glances about him but there’s no-one else around.

As the woman nears the mouth of an alley Marlon sets off toward her at a trot, once again compelled by some unknown force. When he reaches her he grabs her and pulls her into the alley. She tries to scream but the rope is already around her neck. This, too, seems familiar.

The truth rushes in on him. These were his first two kills. With a sickening lurch of understanding, he realizes. He’s never believed in the afterlife but it’s true, nonetheless. Whatever misdeeds a person perpetrates in their earthly life, they’re doomed to keep repeating them in the hereafter. No scorching flames. No devil with horns and trident. For every sinner, his own private hell.

Now Marlon is standing on a deserted beach, the rising sun making a golden dazzle across the sea. A woman wearing shorts and t-shirt appears, jogging along the sand. Marlon sets off toward her. He’ll keep on killing again and again and again …

 

 

I enjoy writing in various genres, including fantasy, horror, mystery and suspense. To date my work has appeared in print publications, both in the UK and US, and also on the internet.

Andrew Graber a self taught visual artist who enjoys using his wild imagination when he creates various forms of visual art, fiction, and poetry.

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