Black Petals Issue #111 Spring, 2025

David Barber: Frankenstein, On Reflection

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Frankenstein, On Reflection

 

by David Barber

 

 

The mob tidies up the lab and leaves

in a jostle of pitchforks and torches,

the castle silhouetted by lightning.

The mood as they make their way homewards

is they misjudged Frankenstein’s efforts

to dismantle these roaming monsters.

 

On deanimation nights there is a whiff

of corruption and the spat of voltage

as each failed creature relinquishes

its vital spark and stiffens into loss,

before stitches can be carefully unpicked

and body parts returned to their coffins.

 

Nails black with gravedirt, Igor tenderly

replaces the brain in an empty skull,

hoping the corpse he hoists on the gallows

is the hero who yanks a murderous blade

from someone’s back and hides it for the years

it takes until the knife becomes innocent.

 

Soon Frankenstein will unlearn his life’s work,

his surgeon’s fingers losing their way

in the wet labyrinths of the body,

his parents teaching him forgetfulness

all through his dwindling childhood, erasing

day after each bright day, until the first.

 

 

 

The End

David Barber lives in the UK. His poems have sometimes appeared in Star*Line, Apex, Strange Horizons and Asimov’s. (He framed the cheque). Though nominated, he has never won the Rhysling Award.

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