By Donald D. Shore
say to be a writer is easy. Just sit down in front of your typewriter
I always passed it off as something a writer says
to sound cool and edgy. And besides, I’ve never even owned a typewriter. That is,
until a short while ago, when Jolene gave me one for my birthday.
A dull black, dust stained relic, with the word ROYAL embossed in gold
letters atop the carriage. We found it in a thrift store one day as we were roaming around
town, inside a little place we had never noticed before. Jolene was off down one of the
limitless aisles of clothing racks inside the musty old building searching for vintage
t-shirts she could sell online, and I was bored, looking through items stored inside a
glass cigar case. My eyes stopped on it, old and battered, surrounded on either side by
junk jewelry like a mountain of black volcanic rock jutting up from an ocean of fake glitz.
“Neat.” Jolene was behind me. I hadn’t
noticed her until she spoke, my eyes transfixed on the laminated keys.
“Yeah,” I agreed, but it was more than ‘neat’
to me. Something about those glass keys, the yellowed sheet of paper rolled into the tumbler,
fascinated me. Pulled me.
I didn’t even see the clerk
until he said, “Would you like to look at it?”
pulled my eyes off the typewriter and saw him standing behind the
counter, rolls of jelly crammed into a tight fitting XXL shirt, wisps of thin curly hair
spiraling out from the sides of his head, and eyes magnified by the Coke-bottle lenses
in his glasses.
“It’s vintage,” he said. “Antique.”
“Does it work?” Jolene asked, always the sensible one, always
quick to the point.
“Of course, it works.”
The clerk slid the back of the case open and grunted as he stooped down
to lift the typewriter out of the case with both of his chubby hands. He set it
gently on the glass counter.
“Comes with its original case, too,”
he said, looking at me instead of Jolene.
stared at it, enraptured, and let my fingers taste the smooth coolness
of the keys. I applied the slightest pressure, barely a touch, and the stamper snapped
like the jaws of a fearsome beast, engraving an ‘a’ on the yellowed sheet of
“You like it?” Jolene whispered close
to my ear, though she sounded a thousand miles away.
I said, sweat forming on my upper lip. A tag hung off the side of
the carriage, and my heart sank into depression. “It’s neat,” I said, putting
strength into my words that wasn’t really there, “but not two-hundred dollars
That was the end of it, or so I thought, as we
left the thrift store. Jolene hadn’t been able to find anything to sell, and after
the disappointment of losing out on my first typewriter, I was ready to go, to forget all
I saw the typewriter again on my twenty-third
birthday. Jolene took me out to eat at my favorite restaurant, Rosie’s Mexican Cantina.
It’s not the most expensive place in town, but for two struggling college students,
it’s like the Ritz. We had our favorites, hers the Mexican lasagna, me, the enchiladas,
and of course several rounds of margaritas.
I don’t think she ever looked prettier than that night. I don’t
think I ever loved her more than I did beneath those red-tinted lights of the cantina.
“I’ve got something else for you,”
she said, as we made our way drunkenly back into the apartment we shared.
I saw it right away. Sitting on my desk like some ancient idol, shining
dully beneath the lamp, was the typewriter from the thrift store. The ROYAL.
could you?” I said, turning to her. I couldn’t imagine how she had
saved up two-hundred dollars.
Jolene smiled. She put her arms around me. I still
remember the soft odor of strawberry margarita on her breath.
like it?” she said.
I nodded. “I love it.”
She kissed me. Her soft lips enveloping everything
I had ever dreamed about.
“I have one more gift for
I couldn’t imagine what she could do to
top the typewriter. Then she smiled, and I knew.
are you going to write about?” she asked me, as we lay in bed together, the soft
light of the moon seeping in through the window blinds like longswords pressed against
I stared at the ceiling, her soft hair against
my cheek, my arm wrapped around her, my hand against her smooth skin. It was one of those
perfect moments, so few and far between in life, where you have everything you want or
need. My girl by my side, my love…
It was then I knew life would never be the same.
Those moments can’t last. They never do. I turned to her, our eyes close together,
and kissed her.
“You’re not going
to tell me?”
“If I told you,” I said, “I’d
have to kill you.”
clatter of the keys pounded through the night. The clack of metal
smacking against paper is a foreign and forgotten sound to those of us brought up in the
age of technology. The soft patter of fingertips against plastic is but a whisper compared
to the physical presence of a typewriter.
The neighbors hated it. Hated me. As I worked,
my mind racing for the perfect word, the perfect phrase to express the rush of feelings
I was putting down for posterity, a loud crash came from upstairs, shaking the ceiling
and throwing off my concentration. I ignored it, shook it off, and it came again a
few minutes later.
BAM! BAM! BAM!
dripped from my nose, wetting the keys beneath my fingers. I typed
on, clack clack clack, a ka-ching! when I reached the margin, a ratchet, clack clack clack
BAM! BAM! BAM!
There is nothing more frustrating
to a writer, holding on to each word with broken fingernails,
than to be interrupted as the words flowed. To block the currents of inspiration with a
heavy foot stomping overhead is the act of insanity.
first real night of working, my first taste of true inspiration, and it
was being obliterated by a cranky old man who wouldn’t know art from a
paint-by-numbers hobby set.
I tore the page from the carriage. Glistening
beneath the light of my desk lamp, those gold embossed
letters spoke to me, and I knew what I had to do. I knew how the chapter would end.
I stood up, the weight of the ROYAL in my hands, and carried it to the
The door swung open after I knocked,
and the short, wrinkled excuse for a human being stared
back at me through crooked glasses.
“What do you want?”
I smiled. “Do you know what this is?” I said, lifting the
ROYAL so he could see it through his cataract filled eyes.
looked down, his mouth a thin wavering line beneath a large bulbous
“Yeah,” he said. “It’s
what’s been keeping me up all hours of the night.”
I said, lifting it higher, raising it above my head, “is my art!”
I brought the typewriter down, dropping its full weight against the
old man’s head. He fell backward, his glasses gone, blood streaming into his eyes
from a cut on his forehead. He crumpled to the floor in his living room, his
arms raised as I came forward, the typewriter in my hands.
“God doesn’t pity the destructors
of art,” I told him, my voice calm, relaxed, as blood dripped
from the bottom edge of the typewriter planting red blossoms on his carpet. “God
is a purveyor of the arts. The giver of inspiration. Look at history. The Sistine Chapel.
The Last Supper…I mean, you have to be a fool not to see it.”
His mouth cracked open, his leathery skin soiled with the blood streaming
from his head, as he reached for me.
I shook my head. The weight of the typewriter pulled my arms down,
demanding I finish what I had begun, demanding the work be finished.
I silenced him as I brought the ROYAL down once
more on his head. His body shook with convulsions, then lay still, the look on
his face hidden by the bloodstained typewriter wedged into his face.
I looked down, knowing I had my first chapter. Knowing it would be a
masterpiece, no matter the sacrifice.
Sometimes Jolene would watch me from the doorway
of our bedroom, arms crossed beneath the soft nubs of her breasts,
dressed only in the over-sized vintage t-shirt she wore as a nightgown. If she suspected
anything, she did well to hide it. No one knew about the old man upstairs. No one would
know, until his rent check was due. And then, the ROYAL told me, the masterpiece would
But she watched me, a jealous
look in her dark eyes as my fingers caressed the blood-flecked
keys of my new lover, the way a budding musician works the keys of grand piano.
Slow at first, little rhythm. Fingers finding their way. Building. Working
in time. An ecstasy in the staccato pounding of the notes.
clack clack ka-ching! Clack clack clack ka-ching!
after page rolled through the carriage. In those dark lonesome hours
of the night, I was oblivious to everything around me except for the words
pouring out of me, running through my fevered mind, stamped onto the blank page with
a sharp clack, each letter like a knife to the chest.
“You coming to bed soon?”
Jolene asked. Every night it was the same.
I would answer, “Yes.” An automatic response, her shadow
hovering over the page as it scrolled through the carriage.
turned to her. “Just let me—” but looking into her eyes, those soft
glimpses of infinity, could still catch my breath, and she would lead me to the
But those days were numbered. Even within the
confines of our bedroom, I felt it call to me. My new
passion, growing, unearthed, simmering to a boil inside me.
not even Jolene, with all her beauty, all the love we shared, could
come between me and my new love. I was writing my masterpiece. I knew this. It
came to me from those keys. The ink stains on my fingertips was the blood of my
soul giving birth to stories untold.
School was forgotten. Silence followed my name
after it was called at roll. The job I worked at the
carwash abandoned. Their calls unanswered. And Jolene made her rounds to the thrift stores
I had to concentrate. Alone, pounding the keys
of the typewriter, ignoring the growing stench emanating from upstairs. It was a
sacrifice. All the great writers made sacrifices for their art. It would be the same for
my novel. My great work of art. My ode to life and love and the human condition, explained
one else had ever been able to explain it before. Sweat
poured from my brow every night, until faint sunlight cut through the window blinds like
“What is this?”
had fallen asleep at my desk and woke dazed and weakened, to find Jolene
hovering over me, my manuscript in her hands. Had I bothered to look in the
mirror, I would have seen a face unfamiliar to me, gaunt and thin from a great
loss of weight. I had poured it all into my work, with the help of the typewriter.
As if in a dream, I watched Jolene flip through the pages, her radiant
brown eyes gone flat as she picked a line or paragraph, read it, and then
flashed to another.
“This is what you’ve been working
Her voice was hard, accusing. Her eyes flashed
toward me like whips. I stood up from the chair, my
heart thudding against my chest like a ballpeen hammer. I tore the manuscript from her
“You know I don’t like for you to
read my work until its finished,” I said, holding onto the pages as if the
stack of papers were a child in need of protection.
work?” she demanded. “You call that your work? You dropped out of
school, quit your job – quit me – for this?”
snatched at the pages, tearing several sheets out of the manuscript,
and held them up like an actor reading for an audition.
gripped her throat – felt the soft throbbing vein in her neck.”
I reached for the page and she pulled away.
“The blade slid between
her ribs like soft butter – the sweet blood flowed
down her pail—”
I snatched the page away.
She started on the next.
“Her eyes popped like over-ripe grapes—”
“Stop it,” I said. “Stop! You don’t understand!”
She threw the rest of the manuscript at me. The pages scattered like
paper airplanes drifting across our small apartment.
right,” she said. “I don’t understand. I don’t understand what’s
happened to you. You’ve thrown away everything,” she pointed at the manuscript
scattered about the floor, “for this? It reads like a psychopath’s manifesto.
There’s no story – just random scenes of girls being murdered!”
“You just don’t understand it, Jolene!”
I protested. “You never have!”
there’s nothing to understand.” Her eyes watered and her breath
caught in her throat. “I wish I had never given you that thing.” She was
crying. The little crumbs of eyeliner soaked up her tears. “Either the
typewriter goes, or I go. This place is
beginning to stink and it’s all because of that…that thing!”
Her words stunned me. My eyes shifted from her
to the typewriter. I felt my insides rip apart.
she reached for it, her fingers splayed out like claws. I beat her to
it. I grabbed the typewriter with both hands. I raised it above my head. She
looked at me, her face blank, terror making its way down her spine. I brought the
weight of the typewriter down on Jolene’s head. There was a heavy crunch as the metal
cracked her skull. Warm blood splattered against my face, my chest, and my fingers, and
she fell, her arms splayed out to her sides, another sacrifice to the Gods of inspiration.
I don’t know how long she lay there. A couple
of days. Maybe a week. I had to finish my book. My great work of art. The clack
clack clack of the keys absorbed me, the typewriter pulling the story out of my very soul.
I hear them coming now, even as I stamp out these
last few words. They’re coming to take me away, to separate
me from her, my lover, my typewriter, my ROYAL. But they’re too late. I’ve
finished. I’ve bled over the keys, and now, as the door comes crashing in –
clack clack clack ka-ching!
Donald D. Shore lives in Huntsville,
Alabama. He has had short stories published in the Western Online, eFiction Magazine, and Freedom Fiction.com.
You can follow him at Donalddshore@facebook.com